The Kalevala (3)
April 1, 2016
The Kalevala is a sequence of folkloric songs, runes and charms from the Karelia region of Finland, collected in the field and concatenated into epic form by Dr. Elias Lonnrot (1803-1884). The versions presented here are not translations or transliterations — they are respectful bastardizations, working from the 1963 English version of the Kalevala produced by the versatile and witty Francis Peabody Magoun Jr.
AN AFTERNOON UPON THE WATER
[being a bastardization of Rune 5 of The Kalevala, lines 45-139]
In a pocket of world-stop, in a mindspace
sits a man in a boat with a bottle and a dog.
Calmly they sit, calmly they float.
He’s tipping sloe gin down his throat.
He is Vainamoinen of the dripping
He drinks sloe gin.
He looks within.
He’s been out here all day,
drinking fermented berries in the skerries
of Kaleva Bay.
He gives a tweak on his fishing line
and his little hook queries the quiet brine.
Patient in the prow sits Smüt the dog.
His coat with misty drops is pearled
and his doggy world
is loosely furled
The mist it maunders, the mist it mooches.
Vainamoinen raises the bottle and quietly
“Ahhhh…” he says. “See, this is the
The second batch. More personality.”
The mist it muddles, the mist it mopes,
and he hoists the bottle and heartily topes.
“Yes. Fucking yes. You can taste the rain
settling into the blackthorn bushes.
You can taste the cowshit.”
The bard’s poetic word is slurred.
Talking to your dog is like talking
like talking to nobody, like talking to God.
Your subjectivity feels odd.
“You know I’m the greatest, Smüt. Eh?
Right? The best of the bards by a
Wherever I walk, I step in golden turds
Watch this. I’ll get us a fish.”
and then, oh how beautifully, he sings.
He sings, the mighty bard!
Little Smüt, little best friend, there in the
attend to your master now!
“O salty bottom, green with sailor souls,
lit by treasure, where the flickering shoals
move like bright ideas through sunken hulls
O undersea aristocracy,
pray send up something for us
We don’t need a whopper,
or a heavyweight flip-flopper.
Give us a middler.
We’ll take a tiddler.
CRASH! And with a shattering of waters
and light flying in flakes
and fishscales like irises going everywhere
suddenly a great fish is there
in the boat jumping
a single syllable of muscle
bending its spine like metal
the ribs of the boat with its tail thumping
kinking and flexing in agonies of air!
“Holy hell, Smüt! What a fish!”
See him scramble, the old curmudgeon,
scramble for his oaken bludgeon.
“Come here, you! I’ll put you out of
I’ll bash your brains in!”
Hee, haw, the boat seesaws.
The fish is writhing all over his nasty
splattering puddles of boat-broth.
“Grab it, Smüt! Grab it!”
The fish stops its dramatic death-dance.
Stands up. Looks coolly at Vainamonen.
“You don’t know me, do you?”
“Uh… Should I?” says the bard.
“Wet-socked old man, with the
and the oversized prostate — I am Aino!
Aino, by your lechery made
Myself I could not live with, so myself
Vainamoinen is aghast. Wordless.
“But I was too young to die,
and much too beautiful, as you are aware.
So my sorrow sank,
was depth-compressed to a fishiness
and then came soaring upward,
full of surface-seeking joy.”
Smüt the dog barks a shapeless bark,
Vainamoinen makes a grab for the
swipes at her radiant flanks,
but she twangs into the air,
flashes in scorn the exclamation of
and disappears over the side.
“Damn it, Smüt! You scared her.”
Despairing, Vainamoinen sniffs his
and is overcome by their fishy redolence.
“I could have had her but she’s gone again!
You’ll pay for this, dog. When we get home
I’m tying you to a post for two years.
I’ll feed you nothing but sparrow-bones.
And every morning, patiently and dutifully
and very bloody thoroughly,
I’ll flog you with a knotted rope.”
And whoops, there goes Smüt over the
swimming busily away, his snout
He’s had enough of the old man’s hands,
the pattings and the thrashings,
the endearments and commands…
He became king of the seals, you know.
Slept at night in a sea-cave, warmed
by the oily bodies of his people.
Left behind entirely his world of
and wore a cold crown of weed.
But that’s another story.
ALL INSTALLMENTS: RUNE 3 (1–278): “Wizard Battle” | RUNE 4 (1–56): “A Failed Seduction” | RUNE 4 (300–416): “Aino Ends It All” | RUNE 5 (45–139): “An Afternoon Upon the Water” | RUNE 5 (150–241): “The Blue Elk” | RUNE 6 (1–114): “Therapy Session” | RUNE 6 (115–130): “Joukahainen’s Mother Counsels Him Against Shooting the Wizard Vainamoinen” | RUNE 11 (1–138): “Introducing Kyllikki” | RUNE 23 (lines 485–580): “The Bride’s Lament” | RUNE 31 (215–225): “The Babysitter” | RUNE 31 (223–300): “The Screaming Axe” | RUNE 33 (1–136): “The Cowherd” | RUNE 33 (73): “Song of the Blade: Kullervo” | RUNE 33 (118–284): “The Cows Come Home” | RUNE 34 (1–82): “The Pipes of Kullervo”.
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